Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
By augmentation communities, one of the gravest problems threatening and menacing societies is nothing but the considerable growing of criminal activities. Unfortunately, nowadays this pernicious phenomenal is increasing especially among juvenile persons, stemming from few likely causes. To tackle it, there are some possible ways, which will be discussed in the following.
Some possible reasons have been mentioned for it. It seems the root cause turns to family and acquaintances. Parents always expect of their offspring to obtain major achievements, which is out of the abilities of children in the most of time. Then, to abscond from suffocated atmosphere of family, juveniles tend to attend gang groups, perhaps leading them to do delinquent deeds. Moreover, by enhancing economic conundrum, originating mainly from government, young people might accomplish outlaw and perilous activities such as shoplifting, purloining, robbing, etc. to acquire some of their requisites which cannot be provided by their parents.
To obviate these serious issues, some solutions can be allowed for. Parents place in the front line of this problem, by dwindling the extraneous requests and trying to elimination peer pressure, coming from classmates of young people. If parents should mind each person is created just with some own specific features, then it may finally aid to slump criminal activities. Government can also play a paramount role, just by dissemination of source among people equally, leading to improvement of life level. Then, parents can afford the plausible asks of their children, eventually dipping of juvenile delinquencies.
To recapitulate briefly, there are some prone contexts pushing young people to take part in committing a crime, namely peer and parent pressure as well as pecuniary problems. Notwithstanding, some methods can consider to solve them like equity distribution of sources and considering children’s abilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider solving'.
Suggestion: consider solving
...lems. Notwithstanding, some methods can consider to solve them like equity distribution of source...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74226804124 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10912065375 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8807335428 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175704290166 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536358164369 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456976508495 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999573706038 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214643403675 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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