Crime is a big problem globally; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion
The high rate of criminals is huge trouble- that why many people agree that none of the solutions can't deal with this completely. From my perspective, I can't entirely agree. Effectively crime preventions have been taken by the government, authority; the Law understanding for everyone are two main reasons that explain my opinion.
First of all, a zero-tolerance policy is taken seriously by the cooperation of government and authority. This implement makes the person who has the intention to break the Law is scared of and the criminal never re-offender. Moreover, any criminal record will consider by the workplace or community that will be a struggle for the wrongdoer to make end meets or make a fresh start in the future. Because of that things, re-offended will be deleted entirely after releasing into society.
The second reason is people have more highly aware of basic knowledge in the Law. In the education system, all educators always teach their students about constitutional Law and Civil Law. This knowledge will help them have right and neat behavior in daily basic, clearly no felons, no lawbreakers. Furthermore, a small community's authority should encourage and reward all good law-abiding citizens that make them have no reason to turn to Crime.
However, year by year the rate of criminal often have a slight increase. The criminal prevention policy or government is not tough on Crime enough, and the punishment would not act as a deterrent. So that individuals, governments, and authorities should cooperate more strictly.
In conclusion, the criminal problem will delete entirely if anyone in society improves their knowledge of the Law and follows precisely the government's policy and the Law systems.
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...ge of the Law and follows precisely the governments policy and the Law systems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25899280576 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93742866098 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60071942446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7812754295 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645187499897 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214556473317 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279412215251 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0390572400534 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276678834821 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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