27. People say that a country will benefits greatly if its sts study abroad. To what extend do you agree or disagree
Nowadays, students have a lot of options after graduation. Some will participate in vocational courses, others will go to one of the national universities, with some students have ambitions, they will choose to study abroad. Some people argue that studying abroad is beneficial for the development of their countries. I agree with this view.
The knowledge and experience which students gain in the process of living and studying in other countries will promote the flourish of the country in many different aspects, such as economic analysis, biology application in medical research, or the technological advancement in automation and innovation. For example, Vietnamese students have an opportunity to study Computer sciences in the United States- it is home to a lot of eminent AI engineers in the world. They are likely to be taught by an excellent professor in CS and AI fields. With a ton of knowledge they have gained, they will soon contribute to the development of technology in Vietnam.
Moreover, students have studied in new countries, they have experienced entirely different ways of living. Combining two opposite cultures could bring much creativity in the working process; thus, the development of the country in the fields that require creativity is meticulous. For instance, Chinese students who study in French, the combination of Eastern and Western cultures they have undergone, would play an essential role in developing aesthetics that highly apply in fashion industry or architecture.
However, others said that if students studies abroad, they would want to stay in the developed countries to build up a successful career and rarely coming back. In modern times, each nation implements many policies which draw attraction to overseas students. This drawback efficiently to deal with.
To sum up, overseas students have a positive influence on the development of their hometowns. The knowledge they have gained, the culture they have undergone contributes from science and technology to humanity's society.
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but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46202531646 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97378790718 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579113924051 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5304564561 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116313112536 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419252013006 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046098745833 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708469979534 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532003355364 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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