Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Thanks to the rapid technological advancements, it is now simpler to use AI to detect and prevent criminal activity. People believe that this improvement will aid in the reduction of crime. I totally agree with this idea and in this essay, I will discuss and try to draw some conclusions.
To begin, with the aid of trail cameras for security monitoring, finding a criminal has never been easier. Security cameras are increasingly widespread on the street, at malls, and even in your own house. You can view it on a smartphone, tablet, or computer from anywhere using an internet connection. Lots of home security cameras are motion-activated, which means they will record and alarm you whenever they detect movement. Police also can use those videotapes later to find and catch the lawbreaker.
Another reason why I agree with this idea is the use of DNA testing technologies in identifying criminals and prosecute the perpetrators. In most situations, DNA is used to solve crimes in one of two ways. A sample of a suspect's DNA can be matched to evidence from the crime scene in situations where a suspect has been identified. The findings of this comparison may aid in determining whether or not the suspect was the perpetrator of the crime. Biological evidence from the crime scene can be examined and linked to offender profiles in DNA databases to assist identify the culprit in situations where a suspect has not yet been identified. DNA databases may also be used to correlate crime scene evidence to other crime scenes.
To summarize, advances in science have led to the introduction of life-saving automation. As I stated before in the essay, I believe that technological innovations have greatly benefitted in the decrease of crime rates since they have made detection much easier.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...g a massive number of people in a short period of time so that some people are more vulnerable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36742424242 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07213316458 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8044034316 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212877527364 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776912110248 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596196202181 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136145217491 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654063995834 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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