currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement ?
In this era, people realize that medicine is an essential kind of life in most societies, especially for health which is chosen as alternative forms of medicine. Yet, many people believe that it can be worst choice for some people. In this essay, I totally disagree with this issue which alternative form in medicine can be dangerous and in ineffective.
In the one hand, patients should know about the different of herbal alternative drug. Such as spices and health methods. It is because, healthy medicine can cure many cases of disease. China is for an example, which have herbal alternative medicine to detoxify poisons with acupuncture and message. However, many traditional alternative medicine used I the whole world and give many advantages for many persons. As an result, many people from the past and today feel satisfied with alternative medicine, it prof that so many modern society now search for traditional medicine.
In the second hand, chemical medicine which used in many hospitals give several problems by its dose and make people addicted. It is because, it has so many ingredient from chemical things. For an next example, is United State of America most people has addicted to chemical pharmacy product and get dependency to pills. And make many people overdose because consume so many drugs from chemical pharmacy.
In conclusion, the major of citizen should choose herbal alternative medicine which is handle from an experts and give more benefit for patience because it is save with enough dose for sure.
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- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement ? 61
- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement? 11
- some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. do you agree or disagree ? include any relevant examples base on your knowladge end experience. 56
- currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine . however , at best these method are ineffective, and it worst they may be dangerous. to what extent do you agree with this statement ? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ople addicted. It is because, it has so many ingredient from chemical things. For an next examp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13147410359 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60496234068 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521912350598 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0396115603 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135404152618 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564430705839 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614578852757 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09583673937 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690431172415 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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