Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat; yet this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests.
An incomparable shadow of death loom over the nature in form of deforestation which is despite the awareness and protection scheme launched by regime, burgeoning at vision blurring pace. One common causes behind such phenomenon is the population burst giving rise to various other factors.
There is no skepticism related to profits gained for cutting down of forests as this open up various opportunities for the humans to build homes, industries, road and many other things on the areas which have been cleared out of trees, plants.
Yet despite everything, these are also the most contributing factor toward the deforestation. A red thread which link all the facets in a cluster is known as population which is despite many control efforts, burgeoning at exponential rate. Although technology is also held responsible for such disaster but when compared to population boom, it seems a minor part of the big universe. According to the World Population Clock, every year populace increases nearby 1% which by current estimates measure up to 82 million people. In consensus of this, demands of food, wood, land also rise to accommodate which, forests are chopped down.
Even though this is considered a major factor toward increasing global warming, however, as trees in forest only provide 28% oxygen of the globe, hence, the malady does not arise from deforestation rather by the bursts in population. On the contrary, soil erosion is main problem arising out of cleaning of forests, even though, it mostly occurs on ground slopes and in the fields.
Before hammering the pin on the table, it is not wrong to ascertain that reducing number of trees may be a major threat to environment, nevertheless, it is not something that cannot be curbed despite the process being tedious and difficult. Nor does it imply that life will cease to exist altogether without forests.
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- Tourism has caused environmental problems in many parts of the world. What sort of problems has been caused and what can be done about them? 84
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- there is too much stress in the workplace what can employees and employers do 49
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... globe, hence, the malady does not arise from deforestation rather by the bursts ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15635179153 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76325575009 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654723127036 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3167505178 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.916666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153001158292 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463735401101 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376141187795 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726037889736 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294532783738 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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