Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems What are the problems What could be done to solve those problems

Essay topics:

Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems. What are the problems? What could be done to solve those problems?

Some nations are facing the problem that their transportation roads are extremely bad so drivers and cyclists are driving on the same road, which is very dangerous. This essay will provide lots of reasons and perfect solutions to solve and reduce this phenomenon.

There are many reasons why cars and bike cycles have been ride on one road. The first reason is that governments do not focus on upgrading roads and infrastructures, this leads to citizens who drive cars or bikes must go in the same line. As a result, the road will be overcrowded, which causes traffic jams and people might feel unpleasant and or even frustrated. Secondly, the speed from cars are higher than bicycles and if the driver is not good in driving, they might cause accidents to cyclers who have a high chance of bad injures such as breaking bones, or worst is death. Therefore, people will have scared emotions after seeing these accidents and they do not want to go on that roads.
On the other hand, we still have solutions to prevent this issue. The first solution is that the government use the national budget to expand the roads, which allow citizens to drive easier and decline the chance of getting crashes into others transports. Moreover, governments can create roads that only cyclists can go and separate from other transports. This makes them feel safe and ride easier and more comfortable than ride in the car lines.

In conclusion, driving on the same lines with various kinds of transports is a major threat to the community. I believe that if governments and individuals work together, this problem will be decreased rapidly and completely vanish in one day.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87279151943 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57503848693 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1374574666 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.076923077 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194361030814 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064474468094 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675200977668 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121406003599 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629792844728 0.056905535591 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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