The danger of smoking
It is undoubtedly true that smoking is becoming a real nerve-racking hassle throughout the world for not only the smokers themselves but also the whole society.Consequently, there is several issues caused by this problem
The first thing to mention is that smoking cigarettes is detrimental for the health. This lethal habit is purportedly contributed to numerous of lung diseases. Tuberculosis, lung cancer or pneumonia, to name but a few.Smoking not only harms the smokers' health but it also have the negative effects on people who reluctantly suffers from passive smoking.Child, for instance,who is exposed to secondhand smoking is at increased risk of developing chest infections, chronic cough and even having cot death.
Furthermore, there appeals to be some evidences that smoking takes the responsibility for ending thousands of people's life. By way of illustration, the average number of demise resulted from both direct and passive smoking is reportedly more than one of the traffic accidents or unhygienic foods.
In the second place, a great amount of money has wasted in consuming the tobacco. It would seem that smoking is an expensive habit owing to high taxation of the government that increases cigarette's price. The world's average tax on tobacco, which is up to 56 per cent, is a good case in point. Additionally, Cigarettes is allegedly addicted and, in some occasion, may lead the smoker into social catastrophe such as pickpocket or robbery with the aim of buying it
To recapitulate, smoking is deleterious for the health of not only the smoker but also people around them.Moreover, it is an expensived habit and may give rise to social evils
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, such as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26394052045 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17213009016 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.816007738 49.4020404114 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8888888889 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167318342671 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662647520718 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528510328049 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964515181605 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291191365258 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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