Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem.
Felling trees for commercial purposes is the most dangerous activity for natural world which has been done briskly by humanity in variety parts of the world. In this essay, I will discuss this standpoint deeply, deetaly and give my personal view to stave of it.
Vegetations are crucial as well as commonly used part of our life not only by their inhibits but also their products. Therefore, deforestation is becoming the significant problem in front of population of the world that they create this trouble simultaneously by satisfying their needs of daily basis and manufacturing. It is obvious, the majority of educational products such as table, pencil, paper and commercial materials as floor, yacht, door and others are making by wood. Thus, forests in different parts of planet are being cut down actively by manufactures and businessmen. However, these people are damaging our environment spontaneously to persuade themselves. As those plants serve as an engine of terrestrial as well as aquatic life by providing oxygen and improving conditions of soil.
Personally I think, we can not change the current condition as the importance of wood in our daily routine and scientists have not invented the raw materials yet, which can replace wood products that are in use. Consequently, I would suggest unique approach to maintain system. To stabilize ecosystem is better to create one central garden in big cities to refresh air and to provide living conditions for animals and plants. Moreover, by establishing special lands, fields, spaces to plant vegetables and trees to supply population with nutrients as well as wood.
By way of conclusion, I pen down saying that deforestation is the huge source of damage to natural world but setting up my approach it can be solved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16896551724 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9256766446 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2231938742 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200986902792 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572964143281 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618375040446 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119333991983 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521326916187 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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