In your opinion what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years?
Modern world is equipped with myriad kinds of crucial innovations that altered our world significantly. Below, I would like to highlight one of them which contributed a lot on generate humans mind to progress and change in the past couple of hundred years.
People may easily be proud of their creations those they have made until now. All of them were invented due to one reason, to make lose our life and flourish it. Personally I think, the most impactful one is computer. The opportunities those computers can offer are massive, from the counting to creating. Imagining up to date world is simply unrealistic without computers, since, almost all specializations depend on this, nowadays. For example, medicine, almost all diagnostics are done by high technologies and treat by them. In addition, scientists are able to reach those achievements as analyzing illness and curing them.
Furthermore, we can use it to entertain, do business, make documents, edit them also communicate with others. Computers influence us by the way of software developing. The huge amount of people use verity types of programs in different purposes. For instance, young generation tend to use them more, consequently they harm their health as well as outlook, while, older ones use them to do most of their daily activities and damage themselves spontaneously.
In conclusion, because of the rapid piece of life I can surely point out that the importance of computer is more crucial than its negative effects on human’s life as our progressing is highly depend on it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...pos;s life as our progressing is highly depend on it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17322834646 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97475531739 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657480314961 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6392159671 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0357512489249 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.012383403319 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02106244299 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.022677596911 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021205971492 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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