Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Deforestation is getting more and more serious in many countries. Dealing with this problem is an essential responsibility for every individual in the world. The two recommended solutions need to be taken into consideration are serious punishment for logging trees illegally and planting trees to prevent erosion.
No one can deny that wood from trees provides the public with myriad benefits such as building houses, making furniture and so on. An increasing number of people, therefore intend to cut down trees to serve their own benefits without considering the consequences of losing many trees. In order to prevent disasters like erosion, flood and so on. The government should enact serious laws to ban cutting trees. For those who cut trees to sell or to take wood for industry should be fired. The amount of fire depends on how many trees they cut and how many times they have committed.
planting trees plays an extremely vital role in protecting the forest from being destroyed. trees help to stop soil from erosion and flood in the rainy season. Raising individuals’ awareness, especially children of planting trees and creating green forests is a necessary activity in protecting human beings’ life in general and the environment in particular. A child needs to be educated to protect the forest and to plant the trees around his house and his school so that he can have a clean and green atmosphere. If every individual is well-educated from a very young age, they would have a great awareness of protecting and saving the environment when they get older.
Protecting trees is one of the ways to keep up human beings’ life as well as any living things on Earth. There are a variety of actions that contribute to helping prevent the forest from being destructed. However, punishing the act of cutting down trees without permission and planting trees are effective ways to save the forest from being seriously destroyed.
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- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem? 67
- The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.( IELTS BOOK 4 TEST 1) 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Planting
...w many times they have committed. planting trees plays an extremely vital role in ...
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Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Trees
...ecting the forest from being destroyed. trees help to stop soil from erosion and floo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, in general, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09316770186 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82598457258 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6682705869 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4705882353 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149971815308 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055052522124 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460213772788 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109055099054 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617956780577 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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