Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Deforestation is one of the most controversial issues that people like debating about because it causes lots of severe results on earth. In this essay, I will address which solutions should be done to overcome these problems and explain how it has been changed.
To begin with, plenty of logging companies have felled a growing number of trees because it is used as various needs. For example, producing mass-produced paper and generating fire. The resource is from forest especially, Amazon was the heart of earth in order to fell trees because of various tree's species. However, most of logging enterprises invest to cut down trees in Amazon so that earth itself loses its purification capacity. According to science magazine "The Nature", every single minute we lost 10 hectares of landfills.
There are some solutions to be done and already achieved successful outputs from among countries. Firstly, South Korea demolishes some environmental regulations which is forbidding indiscreet paper usages. If a company reaches targets to reduce paper uses then governments impose less taxation. Secondly, individuals also have realized how much important to inherit a pristine nature to following generation. Surprisingly, after they aware of importance of conservation, they strive to waste less posable products and do upright recycling. For instance, schools have already transferred paper based education to electronic devices. So, many students study with i-pads, laptops and electronic devices instead of paper contexts. It expends no longer many of the trees which is eco-friendly and efficient.
To sum up, we all needed paper in the past due to all process related to paper documents for example but now all we have to do is at least trying to reuse paper and move into another methods even though it is inconvenience.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35862068966 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90826040734 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679310344828 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5561137861 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1146614684 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341225198726 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293773625429 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673011521199 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330692971117 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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