Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
The development of the logging industry is making forests vanish faster all over the world. This results in an array of serious impacts on the environment. Therefore, a lot of solutions should be taken into action before it is too late.
To begin with, governments must have stricter laws and heavier punishments on human's deforestation. Most people cut down trees for commercial purposes. If the penalties are higher than the profits of deforestation, they will consider continuing or not.
Next, the government should put a limitation on wood's consumption. The higher demand for wooden materials of companies is the main reason for over-logging. If we control wood demand well, deforestation for raw materials can be reduced remarkably.
Final, political makers should have policies to help rural residents with jobs. Mountainous people with the habit of disforesting for farmland is the most important force that contributes to this problem. Because of jobless, they have to cut down the trees to the sale and taking land to cultivate. Unless we help them with stable jobs, this problem will be continued seriously.
In conclusion, this issue is primarily artificial, so solving it is properly possible. In addition to governments' efforts, people should enhance awareness of the environment's problems. Only if administrators and citizens make efforts together, deforestation caused by the human can be decreased rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...tricter laws and heavier punishments on humans deforestation. Most people cut down tre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46846846847 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08813270288 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662162162162 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.1779399273 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.875 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214658757094 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620714775272 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518080598942 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103913030308 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252830212124 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.85 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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