More and more people want to buy clothes, car and other products from well-known brands. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In today’s world, citizens are on the rise; especially, teenagers find and buy updated items such as clothes, cars and other products from dominant brand names. This situation has a significant impact on various aspects of society.
In one sense, I believe this figure impacts the development of communities with different problems. First and foremost, nowadays, when citizens walk down the street they often focus on enhancing people’s appearance with luxury clothes despite their financial limitations. Secondly, the wealthy are able to not only provide their lives with basic necessities, but also provide them with a wide range of additional items.
For some cases, there is a challenge to meet the needs of impoverished residents who rarely find lucrative careers and pay for their cost of living. As a result, this situation leads to tension and compliance discrepancies in society.
Moreover, nowadays, a large number of dominant brand names from well-known companies focus on the economy in a metropolis city to maintain and expand their positions. For example, China, which is the home of many luxury brands such as Samsung, Oppo, and Huewai, is the strongest economic superpower by concentration of famous companies. Thus, residents living in rural areas tend to move to urban centers, which can create overpopulation if there are no solutions in the future.
To sum up, the more money residents spend on luxurious items, the more adversely it affects both the quality of life and the well-being of individuals and the community. Finally, from my perspective, citizens should control their finances to be suitable for their lives by decreasing money spent on expensive necessities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...le to not only provide their lives with basic necessities, but also provide them with a wide rang...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...cies in society. Moreover, nowadays, a large number of dominant brand names from well-known co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37313432836 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8908448139 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652985074627 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8772293239 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147245635612 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450102035386 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564745449567 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724466755762 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490921935957 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.