Today, one of the increasing necessity in our planet is certainly an importunity of food supply. This essay will discuss associate factors of this issue and provide possible solution.
Poverty and hunger became more controversial in recent decades as population in the world has been increasing dramatically year by year. In other words, people need more agricultural or natural productions from its resources in order to feed more people. This issue emerged thousands of people’s death in South Africa as everybody knows. Also, its drawbacks are enormous, such as low level of happiness and even more countries have commenced a “WAR” due to insufficient nutrients and occupying agricultural territories. Moreover, nourishment sources’ scarcity is rooted from the man-made disasters like a drop of garbage or exceed utilization of some harmful gases. For example, global warming which is caused from carbon dioxide that released from cars and other traffics caused low level of rainfall compared to a few decades ago, which is the most necessary for water and agricultural production supplies.
To lessen the anxiety of growing famine, communities and agencies that focus on human being’s problem around the world should organize efficient events and policies that are useful for worldwide peace. Since the growth in population is inescapable and every human born on our planet has a proper right to be alive, increasing the food resources would be an adequate remedy for the issue. Furthermore, to make sure the sufficient sources of food, resources in our land cannot cope with feeding all 7 billion people, so, devising and introducing new nourishments that are regardless of nature but related to chemical experiment to rise the production harmless for human well-being would be acceptable. To achieve such a big achievement, international communities should be willing and supportive for people who are suffering from famine.
In conclusion, if we now consider possible options that are appropriate for increasing the food source, there are numerous approaches that we could make. However, we must start from the bottom of the pyramid to climb until the summit. Therefore, all of above remedies start from the not throwing a grab of garbage in the street.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... and even more countries have commenced a 'WAR' due to insufficient nut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1941.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4217877095 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.991651409 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7988505644 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.4 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173901926257 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529395482928 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458021558947 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102785851205 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376409517919 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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