Despite a variety of sport facilities and gym,people are less fit nowadays than ever before.
What do you think are the main couse of this problem ?
What solutions can be suggest ?
Nowadays due to this luxury lifestyle peoples are become bed patatto. In this, era there are number of health care institutes and sports facilities but individuals are becoming physically weak or less git as compare to past.in this essay, i will shed some light on reasons of this problem along with some solutions how we mitigate this problem.
On the one hand, nowadays individuals become a laiesy to do any kind of physical work. It is just because of advancement in technology every day new electronic gadgets are introduced youngsters admire that and do work or some use for entertainment propous and stay at home all the day raither than do some physical work.moreover, due to lack of time. People did not give time to her fitness they will busy in there active shudule.to examplify, according to survey of oxford university, it stated that in metropolitan cities 70% of gyms and health clubs are closed in last 3 to 4 years because in the race of money peoples do not have enough time to go there gor workout.therefore, in this high-tec era peoples are less care about their physical health.
On the other hand, there are number of solutions by wich we can mitigate this problem. Firstly, individuals shoud aware about their health. The regime should open the awerenesa camps to make awere the peoples about their health .In addition on it, Government ahould enforce the law that the health clubs pr gym fees should be limited so that everyone can afford that. For instance,in 2006 newzeland government atart a awereness camps in every state that make people aware about the health wich motivate people to ho gym and also provide some sports facilities. Hence, the regime play a important role to aolve this problem.
To conclude, Aboved mentioned paragraphs, anylised the causes and solutions for why peoples become less fit and compref to past while haveing a lot of sports facilities and gym .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88271604938 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6727181829 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.232812297 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.818181818 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240593981001 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946285197994 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500982756271 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155268246909 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271028235925 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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