Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Education play a pivotal role in the development of student skills. A handful of people believe that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach their kid how be a good member of the society. Others believe that it should teach in the school.In this i will discuss the both given notions along with my view point why I believe it is the responsibility of the parents to teach ethics to their children.
On the one hand,it is the dutey of the parents to teach their moral values to their offsprings. Parents should devote some time towards their kid and give some experience from their life that how to deal with the peoples in society as well as how to show some respect to the others.Moreover,child should understand the more ethics from their grandparents as compared to the teachers.To exemplify,According to a survey from Delhi university it menifeated that children who should spend more time with their family they are more respectful in the society and also be agoid members of the society.
Hence, how to deal in the society always teach by child family with some experience of their life.
On the one hand, schools have great role in development in the child progress.it is the duty of the teachers to teach the kid how to be a good member in society.in school kid meet with manu kind of peoples and know about how to treat with different kind of peoples. Therefore, their must have a subject in school curriculum in which students must know about how to be a superior member in society.
To conclude, in my opinion teaching by the parents to the kids about how to live in society is best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61672473868 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81328624817 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439024390244 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 127.616613339 49.4020404114 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.222222222 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11111111111 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337401725859 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151797485061 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936749824174 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1975805362 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832624050137 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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