Some people think that criminal behaviour can have genetic reasons,while others believe that only circumstances can led some people to crime.discuss both views and give your opinion .
A handful of individuals believe that if someone do a crime it is just because of their genetic while, others think that only circumstance encourge people to do violence.In this essay i will discuss about the both given notions along with my view point why I believe that society behaviour play a pivotal tole to make someone criminal.
On the one hand, illegal behaviour are totally depend on person’s genetic.if the parents are lawbreaker their behaviour will automatically inculcate in his offsprings. The grandparents can be a role model for some one if they do any kind of illegal activity the child should inspire from it.For instance, According to the `world health organisation’ it is menefested that 70% of habits of kids are similar to their parents. Therefore,the behaviour of human totally depend on its parents genes.
On the other hand, some situations can make people to do illegal activities. Firstly, unemployment play a important tole to do crime individuals have no work to do but they have some needs to fullfil. That encourge the masses to do crime and make some money. Moreover, when some one came out from prison after complete his punishment the society will napt accept the person as a part of society they always do discrimination.which encourages people to do kore crime. To exemplify, pablo escobar was not accepted by his society in 1986 when he came out from prison.which encourage him to do more violent activities. Hence, the situations in life make people to step in criminal activities.
To conclude, although the behaviour is depend on person genes yet, the circumstance also play a important role in life to do crime. In my opinion, if society accept the criminals with open hand and show some respect and love towards them it divert their mind and do some superior work for world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96091205212 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92074720785 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.7516769692 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27278397407 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105143388507 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736288721033 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162499662259 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607289289361 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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