Industrialization and modernization are two important features of developed countries producing several hazardous environmental problems leading the most vital consequence as called global warming. In order to decrease dangerous effects of global warming, there are several measures can be taken by developed countries.
Carbon emission, undeniably the main reason of global warming, has been increasing day by day due to industrial activities of modern era. As the main source of carbon emission, consumption of fossil fuel should be prevented by decreasing the number of fossil-fuel based vehicles and making chance in transport systems toward to more environmental-friendly methods such as express trains, metros, electrically-working cars and buses. Although the main energy source is still fossil fuel, renewable energies like solar, wind, and biomass and geothermal should be used as alternative sources while restraining carbon release in minimum amounts to the atmosphere.
It is well-known fact that distorted biodiversity of planet because of extensive farming and deforestation lead to climate change. The diminishing and disappearing of useful microorganisms and plants using carbon as nutrient due to tremendous usage of pesticides and fertilizers and the pursuit of making more profit with over cultivation have corrupted the balance of the life cycle of Earth leading the increased temperature of atmosphere. In addition, uncontrolled logging causes deforestation which is another source of rise in planet temperature. Mining activities of developed nations disturb the ecological balance of the area with used different gases to purity the metals from the soil.
To conclude, industrial activities of developed countries on mining, agriculture and transport are the main reasons of global warming which can be under control and replaced with sustainable methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88321167883 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35576747441 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609489051095 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1662673175 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.2 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201505465831 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841755926046 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925539324869 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147414204954 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111725171843 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.12 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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