Development in technology has brought various environmental problems.some believe that need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems.other however believe technology is the way to solve these problems.
In the modern age technology became fast with the help of science.while some people argue that it's drawbacks are directly impact by the environment. some think that live simpler life to solve environmental problems. presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in upcoming paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to
Justified the opinion that in the past people prefer to ride by cycle. For instance, tNow people is being gone by cars and motorcycles and people's cover the large distance few a hour's. This development is Favourable fact could be that it is impossible to travel by cycle. But production of pollution is produced at the very higher level it might the reason of heart attack and asthma.Moreover, people have been fully developed on the electricity and machine.it machine's are being operated by electricity in the workshop and chief cause might be that few a trains fully based on electricity and electronic instruments. but in the nuclear power plant our fossil fuels are used for production of heat. As a consequence coal,petroleum are used at very higher level in every country so it reached at the danger extinction.
However, a number of definite actions could be take to mitigate that our basic need is electricity fullfied by our requirements. Easiest way to work it out would be to people should used the solar power and some companies make the solar cars. The most successful way to confront this would be to recycling technology should be improved by help of government and in the local areas people should prefer to go by cycles.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to save the environment is a foremost thing. but in opinion both are important Environment is a place which human being live and technology is a way which show the best way to live the comfortable and satisfaction life in the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10380622837 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04408605861 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543252595156 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.131545992 49.4020404114 397% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.833333333 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.1666666667 20.7667163134 232% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132761886066 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739758022931 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767255137631 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075223903338 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751750680951 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 13.0946893788 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.76 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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