Developments in science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern age improvement of science and technology have create the so many environmental problems and some individuals thought about that simpler way of life will protect the environment while other's think science and technology can solve this problems.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that there are probably a number of factors involved with the development of science to cause the environment. The chief cause might be that large amount of air are being polluted by the vehicles. As a consequence day by day air are tend to adverse effects on the peoples human being. For instance, by the WHO recent survey findings and clear that 30 percent of air is polluted by the nomination of vehicles. As well as subsequent factor could be that in the thermopower plant greater amount of unburnt carbon is released in the air and it is unfavorable for human being.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of the strict rules should be make by government to minimum use of natural fuel and majority of vehicles are run by the solar power and rules must be followed by the individuals. The solar power is a environmental friendly and free source of energy, and in the factories or in the houses use the solar power. Where as, with the help of science made the solar cycle as a consequence children are more likely to drive this cycle rather than cars.
To conclusion, although there are good reason,but in opinion I would pen down by saying that people prefer to use the more than more solar power is that the best way to mitigate the environment problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'created'.
Suggestion: created
...rovement of science and technology have create the so many environmental problems and ...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... think science and technology can solve this problems. One should provide a variety...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...air are being polluted by the vehicles. As a consequence day by day air are tend t...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...e for human being. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of the strict...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
... mitigate of the strict rules should be make by government to minimum use of natural...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... by the individuals. The solar power is a environmental friendly and free source ...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...s or in the houses use the solar power. Where as, with the help of science made the sola...
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Line 4, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...nclusion, although there are good reason,but in opinion I would pen down by saying t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72142857143 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64629120523 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3302810403 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252791308375 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888567914298 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157585846844 0.0667982634062 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175447213179 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.211430020296 0.056905535591 372% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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