Developments in technology has brought various environmental problems. Some believe that people need to live simpler lives to solve environmental problems. Others, however, believe technology is the way to solve these problems.
The best way to solve the world's environment">environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuels. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary world, more and more people have a tendency to make use of transports for various purposes and this contributes to the environment">environmental problems like global warming or noise pollution. I totally agree with the idea of raising the cost of fuels to protect the environment.
On the one hand, as we know earth is the only planet can be seen as having live and if people tend to commute to work by their private car or other means of transport will result in severe environment">environmental problems which comes from exhaust fumes, and congestion charge in rush hours. To illustrate, most of people fed up with public transits despite its affordable charge because they have to wait for a long time and its inconvenience, therefore they turn to motorbike or private car for travel. therefore, the figure of authority throw their weght behind it should raise green taxes on fossil fuels and industrial factories in order to reduce the dependence on fossil fuels, alleviate environment">environmental problems and the risks of getting respiratory problems. Second, global warming and climate change are considered the pressing problems that human beings face nowaday. this lead to melting of two polar ice caps and extinction of many flora and fauna and the biodivesity is seriously affected. For example,the industrial waste released from many industries not only deteriorate the environment, but also the human well-beings.
On the other hand, renewable energy sources like sun, water, etc plays a vital role in remaining the flow of production of industry and a wide variety of household. All of which are clean, safe and infinite. For instance, food miles constructed all over the world to satisfy human's basis needs and some heavy industries. There are a wide range of non'governmental organizations established to raise awareness of environment">environmental protection but most of them is unrealistic. people should take action on climate change as soon as possibe. Besides, upgrade and expand public transport provision is essential, which help co-workers and students have access to public transport rather than driving. Carbon footprint released on a daily basis is extremely high causing the air pollution and soil pollution and directly leading to ozone layer depletion.
To sum up, I believe that the national and local government should adopt the policy to cut down on emissions from fossil fuels, and encourage law-abiding citizens make use of renewable energy sources instead to keep the earth clean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44575471698 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.10299751391 2.80592935109 146% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594339622642 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9096781233 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.277777778 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190828585498 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517009492029 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609515692625 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110145160973 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625388413532 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.