Museums and are galleries should concentrate on works that show history and culture of their own country rather than works of the other parts in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that artworks exhibited in the museums and art galleries should be concentrated on national ones rather than international ones. From my perspective, while i accept that people should put a high priority on
showing
the history and culture of their own country, we would argue that we still should learn about the works of other nations in the world.
On the one hand, a local museum should be a place which honors historical values of the land where it is located. To illustrate, there are a wide variety of historical objects exhibited, and the portraits of heros hang on the wall or the life-sized scultures of people who sacrified themselve for the sake of country. they are the visual reminders of the past because they
show
residents the periods of ups and downs that their ancestors experienced. Therefore, it helps instill the patriotism and national pride in local’s mind and then feel more connected to the place and its history. For instance, students tend to go to the museums or art gallery to gain deep insight into the history .second, it contributes to the preservation of traditional culture and customs. To be more specific, traditional crafts, costumes and ways of life which are gradually obsolete in modern socity.
On the other hand, i believe that the figures of authority should exhibit the international works of art in public institutions like museums or art galleries. First, it offers local residents a great chance to be exposed to artworks and artifacts from foreign lands. In addition, it brings them a new vision of the world from historical and cultural aspects which helps them broaden their horizons. second, it helps to enrich local people’s social life. For instance, it is an opportunity to enjoy and sense masterpieces made by world-famous artists like Van Gogh and Leonardo Da Vinci. Additionally, it is considered to be an inspirational source that help them to think outside the box and ease their mind after a hard-working day.
To sum up, i believe that it is necessary for the government to take into consideration about showcase the international works of arts because of its great advantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03047091413 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87638952247 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545706371191 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2426072302 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.066666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229881557193 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667819568742 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709691562978 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115887062516 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784040264528 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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