In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. ?
In some nations, the figures of authorities are stimulating a wide variety of companies, heavy industries and businesses to migrate from cities to rural areas. While there are some advantages of this trend, I believe that the disadvantages can not be negleted.
first, the negative side of this development can not be overlooked and we should give enough though as well. people have to cope up with a wide variety of drawbacks in less developed countries such as security, lack of transportation, approriate infrastructure to setup an industry and scarcity of communication channel. To illustrate, the figure of authority and companies have to spend a huge amount of money to invest in the transport infrastructure, install surveillance camera and other modern gadgets to ensure the flow of production and operation of the industry, all of which are known as financial burden that many companies have to bear at first. second, most of workers and staffs with high academic performance and sufficient level of education or qualifications settle down in metropolis rather than rural area because of the high standard of living and the salary offered extremely higher than those in countryside. Therefore, headhunts have to make a great effort to attract staffs with good academic performance.
On the other hand, people living in rural areas will have a great chance to have a well-paid job and gain job prospect in the future. To illustrate, many multinational companies established in the countryside provide jobs for many workers which help reduce the unemployment rates, poverty and crime rate like shoplifting or robbing. For instance, people become involved in crime as a means to get money. second, environmental problems they have to face in urban area like traffic congestion in rush hour, noise pollution an air pollution and the risks of getting lung cancer or respiratory illness are relatively lower. As an be seen, some research institutes have proven that those live close to the industrial zone within ten kilometers have a much higher risk of getting cancer. Meanwhile, each square in the big cities are as precious as gold. Thus, it is economic to setup industry in rural area.
To sum up,it seems to me that the benefits of relocating hugh industrial companies in regional zones such as lower risks of getting lung cancer, reduce labor costs and available job opportunities do outweigh its disadvantages.d
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2039.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18829516539 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00644719845 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2377575542 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.933333333 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131139305218 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459525015862 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471659709791 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960080380707 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579784333209 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.