Difference between countries become less evident each year, Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?
This is the sign of globalization that the various factors like fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV2 channels are found to be quiet similar these days. c This essay will bring a familiar note about the advantages and disadvantages where advantages have more weight rather than disadvantages.
Firstly, 21st Century going to be remarkable to bring a tremendous change in Indian history where number of MoU signed for well being of nation to take future into consideration. Though, People are welcoming the international culture widely for instance apparel brands Gucci, Van-husen, palatable foods like Dominos, MacDonald’s are on high street. Moreover people love to listen and watch various overseas podcast, songs and news channel and live telecast. Hollywood movies and series are the cup of tea of most teenagers these days. In order that this helps people to showcase their talent at international level and helps them who want to study abroad or immigrate for job because they are use to of it and that not comes out as a hurdle of their way.
Secondly, to take another side into consideration this has some adverse effect over population for instance people starts avoiding to follow their own culture and starts accepting overseas culture rather than to think about their consequences. In order to conquer their culture they starts consuming junk food which brings a negative impact on body of individual.
Finally, to sum up the writing this can be said that the acceptance should be treated to an extent and people should not forget their culture and tradition in order to get an international culture and tradition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: C
...e found to be quiet similar these days. c This essay will bring a familiar note a...
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Line 2, column 350, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ominos, MacDonald’s are on high street. Moreover people love to listen and watch various...
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Line 2, column 694, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...d or immigrate for job because they are use to of it and that not comes out as a hu...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding following'.
Suggestion: avoiding following
...r population for instance people starts avoiding to follow their own culture and starts accepting ...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
... In order to conquer their culture they starts consuming junk food which brings a nega...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14552238806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76366116082 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623134328358 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2502736311 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.9 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105733012235 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422240510897 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349577005888 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682597184709 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433092755483 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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