Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?
It is undeniable that the world is now turned into a “Global Village”. One of its impacts is that people around the globe are exposed to the same products and services, and share similar habits. In my opinion, the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages.
Globalization certainly has had some impact on indigenous cultures of many countries. However, I believe that this impact is largely harmless and at the same time, it has exposed these cultures to other cultures around the world. This is a great opportunity to learn and evolve. Also, an understanding of foreign cultures benefits one when one has to travel abroad for work leisure. In other words, people exposed to other cultures can interact confidently with the locals whenever they travel abroad and they are less likely to get culture shocks.
Furthermore, when everyone tends to have the same tastes in fashion or food, trade and tourism flourish, there are more job opportunities. Moreover, when people looks and thinks alike, there are fewer chances for conflict. Wearing the same kind of clothes or eating the same kind of foods also protects people from many kinds of discrimination.
In addition to this, similarity in tastes helps both the consumers and the producers in the market. This is because manufacturers can sell their goods and services with ease in any part of the world. This could encourage healthy competition and avoid any kind of monopoly in the market. As a result, consumers have access to plenty of choices and at the same time, manufacturers are forced to improve the quality of their products.
In conclusion, after having some points above, although globalization has a small impact on customs and traditions, I firmly believe that it has improved the lifestyle of people all over the world by making quality products and services available everywhere. It also fosters understanding among people of different nations and ethnicities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, as to, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19558359621 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88874948174 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8664450094 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8823529412 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166282635169 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505660616971 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334787401159 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911692907498 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295489259661 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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