Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, and TV channels.
Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?
It is true that many aspects of culture are becoming increasingly similar throughout the world. Although this trend has some benefits, I would argue that there are more drawbacks.
On the one hand, the globalization of fashions, brands, eating habits, and other ares of culture has some benefits. Firstly, because of the competition between many nations all over the world, brands of fashion, cosmetics, foods,etc always try their best to produce better products. Thus, people can buy clothes, foods, cosmetics... of different brands with high quality and reasonable prices. The way they dress, make-up, eat will be updated day by day by advertisement and TV channels. Physical borders between nations are faint because of cultural globalization. This trend helps develop of economy and society. If people have similarity in culture, they are easier in contact each other in business, making friends and travelling.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks of cultural globalization are even more significant. The other side of serious competition between brands and countries is increase of fake goods. The reasons are, the fakes have similar appearance with the real ones with cheaper prices, and international market is too wide and complex to have effective regulation from nations. Moreover, people are easy to buy foreign cloths, make-up items, foods,etc it threatens to domestic production if governments do not have subsidiary. Finally, the spread-out of culture makes people face with losing individual impression. All people have same clothes, make-up style, eating habits in order to follow the trends. In addition, this phenomenon warn about losing national identity in long time.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of globalization, in terms of cultural habits do outweigh the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46478873239 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88835433349 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8626064754 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213674356161 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596608496691 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349331585318 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121429743096 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446644957032 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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