This table provides information on the proportion of the population aged 65 years and over in 3 countries (Canada, Germany and the UK) for the years 1988, 2000, and the estimated percentages in 2030.
This table provides information on the proportion of the population aged 65 years and over in 3 countries (Canada, Germany and the UK) for the years 1988, 2000, and the estimated percentages in 2030.
Overall, the number of elderly people (is projected to) increases in all three countries over this time period. In addition, the highest proportion of elderly people, in Germany, will continue to remain at the highest level in 2030, while this rate is lowest in the Uk at all times.
Between 1988 and 2000, the aging populations of Canada and Germany increased by about 5% to 20.67% and 25.32%, respectively. On the other hand, the UK showed relatively little change in the proportion of the population aged 65 and over and remained below 15% in these two years.
By 2030, it is expected that the population aged 65 and over in all three countries will increase by about 5.5%. This rate is predicted to reach 30.42% in Germany, 26.35% in Canada and 20.35% in the UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: CONTINUE_TO_REMAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'remain'.
Suggestion: remain
...ion of elderly people, in Germany, will continue to remain at the highest level in 2030, while thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5976533541 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514792899408 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5033772467 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.577907260432 0.215688989381 268% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.268927796977 0.103423049105 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.303016982862 0.0843802449381 359% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.404556129715 0.15604864568 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.347666737905 0.0819641961636 424% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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