director of large companies often recieve bigger increase in salaries as in ordanary worker,as employer organisation says that this attract the best talent give your opinion
Peoples who are on big seat are valuable assest for organisation.Manager director frequently get a handsome amount as compare to other employers according to employers arganisation it is complesary to attract best authority capabilities.in this i will discuss why such steps are nessary to catch out best telent which demands attractive package then other ordanery labours.
Although,some argued that giving a person such a great amount is totally injustice.as their concern that labour doing more physically demanding than director of companies.As on of my friend always argued that should be more incentives for labours then managment.he always give statistic the growing number of deaths which occurs at work places are mostly labour worker as compare to manager.for instance these donot have any gravity or pension.in my point of views these poor worker gave their energy to factory their should be some money in term of pension for their old age.
in my point of view the package these managment takes they well desirve it.As per employers organization it attract best of best which in tern benefit the company.Because,these people passed their entire life fristly,to studies it and secondaly;to practice to gain some experience.Hence,they invested on it in the form of money and energy.for example;my father having a experience in marketing at well known multinational company.he has gave his fifty valuable years to this profession whenever some companies offered him.he always used to say i deserve more than this but in our point of view its ok.while these peoples make companies rules and run small state.increasingly salaries bound these worthen person with organisation.
In this essay we decussed why director having bigger salaries increment then other employers as employers organisation says these bound the best worker.in short i absoultly agreed with to earn profit you have to invest something on it in order to get huge business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Manager
...at are valuable assest for organisation.Manager director frequently get a handsome amou...
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Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'attract the best'.
Suggestion: attract the best
...loyers arganisation it is complesary to attract best authority capabilities.in this i will d...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...act best authority capabilities.in this i will discuss why such steps are nessary...
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Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , some
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Suggestion: As
...ly demanding than director of companies.As on of my friend always argued that shou...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...es for labours then managment.he always give statistic the growing number of deaths ...
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Suggestion: laboured
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
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Suggestion: As
...se managment takes they well desirve it.As per employers organization it attract b...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se managment takes they well desirve it.As per employers organization it attract b...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
...gment takes they well desirve it.As per employers organization it attract best of best wh...
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Suggestion: Because
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Suggestion: , these
...hich in tern benefit the company.Because,these people passed their entire life fristly...
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... people passed their entire life fristly,to studies it and secondaly;to practice to...
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Suggestion: Hence
...aly;to practice to gain some experience.Hence,they invested on it in the form of mone...
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Suggestion: , they
...o practice to gain some experience.Hence,they invested on it in the form of money and...
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Suggestion: an
...and energy.for example;my father having a experience in marketing at well known m...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...well known multinational company.he has gave his fifty valuable years to this profes...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...anies offered him.he always used to say i deserve more than this but in our point...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...more than this but in our point of view its ok.while these peoples make companies r...
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Suggestion:
...rofit you have to invest something on it in order to get huge business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21594032951 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.2975951904 374% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.107509614 49.4020404114 363% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 411.75 106.682146367 386% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.5 20.7667163134 368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.5 7.06120827912 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212145563781 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137021443555 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599640347949 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137021443555 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599640347949 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.2 13.0946893788 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.12 50.2224549098 -28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.74 8.58950901804 137% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.1190380762 320% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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