Many people complain about commercial advertisements and their influence on children. Should it be controlled by the government? What are the possible effects on children?
most of the people criticise about tv adds and their impact on childrens should managed by governments.there are many possible influence on childrens like children spend most of the time in watching television although, it made them extravagant and buy things which may be harmful for them.alots of commerials consist of funks food adds and unhealthy and synthetic goods.which take away them from healthy life style.therefore, the government should bann these type of add for childrens.
on average children pass their 28 hours before screen and see all type of commerical like mostly add are about food stuff.children want to use these stuff and become addicted.like fast food and synthetic products are on fire to use them.people perfer to eat meat and meat product other vegetables and cereals diminish from their life which are important for their life.Inspite of prences of fruits most people consume supplements foe vitamins because of their easy use.
these tv add represent a certain type of life style like more glamerious life which help them to build certain type of perception.certanily,some adds have objectable content which is also not good for them.like our add are more centred about active role of boys and soft lype of image of girls or certain types of professions which effect their mind. for exemple many commercial are about baby formula milk which descourage the motherfeeding and natural milk.
government should not allow to putt them on tv or specific code type of machanism used to run them on tv.presents should also take responsibility to decrease their screen time for children and alternatives activities conduct for them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20599250936 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10732340873 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.569634673 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.0 106.682146367 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.4 20.7667163134 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238242060348 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135105346569 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721303985745 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152551935476 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676386076432 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 11.3001002004 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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