Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of media
With the tremendous development of modern technology, people are surrounded by a media-rich society. Some people think that living in such a society brings us numerous benefits while others argue that it can exert negative impacts on us.
People cannot deny the disadvantages of social media. The most common criticism is that people have a tendency to lead a sedentary lifestyle. This is because they prefer watching their favorite films or lying at home rather than hanging out with friends. Clearly, this behavior results in several illnesses such as obesity, or anxiety. Furthermore, fake news is becoming widespread on most social platforms, which makes people susceptible to mislead with incorrect information.
However, there are several obvious advantages that we can gain from social media. Firstly, it can stay in touch between humans regardless of geographical distance. Thanks to the availability of social networking sites, namely Facebook or Zalo, we can keep updated with the latest information about family members or relatives who are staying away from us globally. Another positive aspect of living in society invaded by social media is to assist our learning objective. A large number of people are utilizing social media to complete assignments required to be done or seek materials related to studies, especially in the period of the outbreak of the Covid-19 pandemic.
In conclusion, although there are some clear drawbacks to living in a media-rich society, enhancing communication and learning has improved our lives. In my opinion, the drawbacks of living in such a society are overshadowed by its benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ern technology, people are surrounded by a media-rich society. Some people think ...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...ia is to assist our learning objective. A large number of people are utilizing social media to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40625 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8922609391 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63671875 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9979235379 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8571428571 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138960412653 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537818873474 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791910432783 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709504869344 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263736084877 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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