With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be.Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.
Nowadays, there are more and more couples who are marriage breakdown. This phenomenon is due to
distance between the members of the family in modern society. I will give some causes and solution about that.
Modern lifestyle is the most reason to breakdown in marriage. Parents work harder than those of previous generation because they want to have more money to support financial burden of family. There are many families have to work all day from on the morning until the late night. They do not have time to talk and play together. Consequently, people fell boring and will divorce. Other reason, family breakdown because they have not studied each other well after living together, they are not suitable and cannot live together. Arranged marriage and marriage contract also are a little reason to divorce.
In order to overcome this problem and make families closer, people’s lifestyle must change. People need spent a lot of time to take care together. In addition, when people see some family have a plan to divorce they should advice this family and teach them the result of divorce.
Conclusion while it is improbable that any solution will be found in the near future, I feel that the abovementioned measures would be a good first step.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...wadays, there are more and more couples who are marriage breakdown. This phenomenon is ...
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Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...age breakdown. This phenomenon is due to distance between the members of the fami...
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Line 6, column 229, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'advise' (a verb)?
Suggestion: advise
...mily have a plan to divorce they should advice this family and teach them the result o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, well, while, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47909432501 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611374407583 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2761517208 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3571428571 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225919620235 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693863185579 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604719601241 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118190533564 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527672419815 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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