In recent years, the number of divorced families has increased significantly. Moreover, a considerable number of people believe that family bonds are not as strong as they used to be. The examination of the basis of this inclination and possible acts needed to be taken to tackle the detrimental effects are highlighted in this essay.
Firstly, chief among the causes of this issue is lack of communication among family members. In past times, people were able to spend more time with their friends and family. However, nowadays, most of the kids and teenagers are spending their time with mobile phones, computers or other technological devices. Moreover, modern competitive work life requires adults to work as more as possible to create better financial possibilities for themselves and their family. In other words, people tend to spend their time at work to provide their family with luxurious life at the cost of invaluable family relationships.
To address its root causes government should regulate maximum working hours of offices. By doing so workers will have more time for spending with their precious family members. Apart from this, government and special organizations can arrange specific events that involves events which can be participated by families and have entertaining moments. One further measure would be limiting children’s time spent with technological devices in order to create more place for family meetings.
To conclude, it indubitable that the problem of such complexity has no solution which is likely to change the whole scenery in a very short period. However, time regulations and special family events are more likely to bring about positive outcomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 383, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...rk life requires adults to work as more as possible to create better financial pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3595505618 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83041020484 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2739703986 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.214285714 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252047487645 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891381824212 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496205730676 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154458697336 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658055749859 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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