Do you think human behavior is based on nature or nurture?
Mankind behaviour is believed to be function from their upbringing, while scientist have found many evidence to prove that genetic codes have inevitably been affected on human treating. I personally think both views of argument are involved in human behaviour. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my view before arriving at conclusion .
In one hand some people are accepted that their children will behave according what their parents will teach them. This group are believed that a children behavior is impacted by their parent’s behavior and in upper ages their behavior have shaped mostly based on peer pressure and communicating in society. Due to this fact apprehensive parents try to lay down rules for making influential barrier to instill their juvenile need not have behavior against low at home or community. For instance, cleaning up theirs mess, pulling their weight or accepting the consequences of wrong behavior which is life threatening.
Given the above consideration, although parent’s upbringing has the significant impact on human treating, the heredity issue, nowadays, is really controvertial and persuasive. Based on scientists recent investigation, the existence of a person in terms of mental and physical have appeared in their genetic molecule which is named DNA. DNA is the hereditary molecule which can transfers from generation to generation . Mankind have always illustrated their family characteristics. Not only, has DNA disclosed family appearance features in their babies shape, but also it have undeniable affected on children behavior.
In conclusion, I think each human character include, whatever they have inherited from their parent and every things have experience in their path of life and their community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun evidence seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much evidence', 'a good deal of evidence'.
Suggestion: much evidence; a good deal of evidence
... upbringing, while scientist have found many evidence to prove that genetic codes have inevit...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rt my view before arriving at conclusion . In one hand some people are accepted ...
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Line 5, column 383, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'transfer'
Suggestion: transfer
...NA is the hereditary molecule which can transfers from generation to generation . Mankind...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... transfers from generation to generation . Mankind have always illustrated their f...
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Line 5, column 577, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ures in their babies shape, but also it have undeniable affected on children behavio...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their path of life and their community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, still, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54578754579 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97281567842 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8182391021 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.461538462 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119854965079 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482453506347 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482338663656 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772613894391 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122519993156 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.