Does travel helps to promote understanding and communication between countries.
Travelling is one of the best way to learn about host country as well as their nation, culture, behaviour etc. By travelling people can enrich their store house of knowledge at the same time they can see the unseen, know the unknown. Journey from one country to another also helps to overcome monotony and dullness wherever it keeps one's mind fresh and makes people wise. According to my point of view, it is easier to developed understanding and exchanging culture, knowledge, information between one reign to another reign by travelling as through travel people can learn about different nation their inhabitants, morals and values and so on, it also easy to learn various languages by visiting various nations.
Firstly, I strongly believe that, journey to other country make people wise by giving them lots of information about various nation and their culture. However, it is impossible for people to get knowledge about other reign without travelling these country as it helps to exchange knowledge and information. A couple of decades ago people had no available opportunity to travel, they only confined in their own state so that they found it difficult to know about other nation, their culture and habits. Now a days, we have so many sources to travel which helps us to know the other countries. For instance, India is a multicultural country, every year many tourists visit this nation and learn about the culture of India.
Secondly, from my perspective, it become more easy to learn the language of other country through travelling. When people visit other country and live there a couple of years they can absorb the culture of the reign it also helps then in acquisition their language. For example, if a Bangladeshi travel Australia and live there for several years they will learn the English language very easily.
To conclude, it can be said that, people acquainted with other nation by travelling and travelling is the only way to exchange culture and improve understanding with other reign.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...other nation, their culture and habits. Now a days, we have so many sources to travel whic...
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Line 3, column 507, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...r nation, their culture and habits. Now a days, we have so many sources to travel whic...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
.... Secondly, from my perspective, it become more easy to learn the language of othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05389221557 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62181784057 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494011976048 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7397201958 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182059746467 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756554595677 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404607194259 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123347587476 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237015287267 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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