It is proven that childish minds are programmed to imitate other people whose are surrounded by them.Following their near and dear one day by day form their social and cognitive skills which profoundly dominate their future lifestyle and character while reading books, they are not mature enough to grasp those havitual activities.
I have strong reasons to advocate my point is that childhood is the time, children are mostly attracted by playfull activities whis is undoubtedly impossible for books because readers might have knowledge but the lack of understanding the technical matters, they will unable to evaluate the practical circumstances.for example, playing background music during school time or building properties with plastic blocks are the common mode of teaching in uk for preschool goer infants.by this time the student have knowledge relating to those objects.Moreover,social interactive skills with practical issues would be just a peace of cake for them.
However,listening bad time stories and involving co-curricular performance not only make them confident but also build up the experiance of solving difficulties.somehow face to face circumstances would be easier for them.
To recapitulate,the activity those draw children attention instantly or physical attraction fulfill the young childs character of creativity and healthier wellbing.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 69
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 61
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. 11
- Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82587064677 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49051691359 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.716417910448 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 184.665068435 49.4020404114 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.75 106.682146367 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 7.06120827912 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0583410465469 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344449883496 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02931238908 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0344449883496 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02931238908 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.42 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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