Drug abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?

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Drug abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?

Up to now, drug abuse has become a contentious phenomenon in many developing countries. This trend is bound to cause so many thorny problems to social life and economic development in many countries.

As can be seen, nowadays, some adolescents and adults use stimulants as a form of entertainment for themselves. For that reason, it becomes one of the main problem cause criminal problems in society, that lead to the development of countries. The use of stimulants costs a lot of money, leading to uncontrolled addiction problems that cause robbery and even murders. Therefore, societies become less secure, so it due to make people feel threatened and worry when they have to prevent theft. Besides, drug addictive also causes health problems, which lead to an increase in disease and make budget stagnation.

Notwithstanding, every problem has solutions of their own and governments could perform to mitigate the aforementioned issues. First, a possible solution is to increase the awareness of the cause of the harm by stimulants by giving lectures at schools and organizing drug abuse prevention events. Second, governments could introduce laws to deter and limit their widespread use, thereby reducing the amount of use and trade. Finally, people should encourage individuals to detoxify and help them reintegrate into society, thus creating motivation for other individuals.

In conclusion, there is a wide range of solutions for drug abuse, and it can be used to prevent and reform stimulant addiction.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35983263598 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03610620077 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.7853370715 49.4020404114 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.75 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210675772015 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775508764773 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641794669633 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132623545599 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461817596 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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