Drunk driving is the leading cause of vehicle accidents. What is the best way to restrict people from doing it?
A generation ago, intoxicated drivers was not much more as same like thesedays. Subsequently, previous days drunk driving did not lead to cause substantial amount of road accident. However, in current time drunk drivers are the major reason for ample amount of vehicle accidents. In this essay I will discuss some core of the reasons for this problem and propose some solid solutions.
One of the main causes of this problem is that dearth of law enforcement and restrictions. Actually drunk drivers are the main reason for notorious road accidents By this I mean due to the fragile law enforcement by authority, insouciance and neglegency of legislature and authority it is generally drive the people to drunk driving. For example, in Bangladesh prevalent law and orders are not sufficient for protect the drivers especially bus and truck drivers from drunk driving. The solution for this problem is that government have to emphasize to strict the driving related laws and ensure the drivers related restrictions against the alcohol and drinking which will eventually lead to slump the road accidents.
Another reason is that avavility of cheap alcoholic drinks in highways. That is to say some bad people sell those drinks to the drivers in affordable price. It is the main cause of proliferating intoxicated drivers in the road. To tackle this issue highway police have to be initiative to find out those sellers who sell their drinking related circumstances without licence and take legal action against them.
A third cause of the problem is that personals problems of vehicle drivers. Sometimes multiple type of family and relation related problems drivers intake alcohol related drinks in order to exonerate from stress and psychological satisfaction. Which also cause of huge number of accidents To be more precise they try to overcome from those mental instigation while they are in loneliness long driving. The way forward could be government and several organization will might be arranging mental counseiling programmes to solve those personal problems.
To sum up drunk driving which is the leading cause of accidents due to the reasons such as posity of law enforcement, predominant alcohols in freeway which are not pretty penny and personal depression and stress among drivers. It is a serious problem unless meticulousness of law and regulations of government, withhold selling illegal alcohol by highway patrols and government initiatives to focus the personal conceal problems of drivers. Personally I believe the main reason for solving this problem lies with government and drivers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
..., intoxicated drivers was not much more as same like thesedays. Subsequently, prev...
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Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as same 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...cated drivers was not much more as same like thesedays. Subsequently, previous days ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'driven'.
Suggestion: driven
...gislature and authority it is generally drive the people to drunk driving. For exampl...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...drinks in order to exonerate from stress and psychological satisfaction. Which al...
^^
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stress and psychological satisfaction. Which also cause of huge number of accidents ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem lies with government and drivers.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, third, while, for example, i mean, such as, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30917874396 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85371932262 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2371691194 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.684210526 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190553928662 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614338925592 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584455165016 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105197688898 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416689923748 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
..., intoxicated drivers was not much more as same like thesedays. Subsequently, prev...
^^
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as same 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...cated drivers was not much more as same like thesedays. Subsequently, previous days ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'driven'.
Suggestion: driven
...gislature and authority it is generally drive the people to drunk driving. For exampl...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...drinks in order to exonerate from stress and psychological satisfaction. Which al...
^^
Line 4, column 245, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stress and psychological satisfaction. Which also cause of huge number of accidents ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oblem lies with government and drivers.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, so, third, while, for example, i mean, such as, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2198.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30917874396 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85371932262 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492753623188 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2371691194 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.684210526 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190553928662 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614338925592 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584455165016 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105197688898 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416689923748 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.