Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The amount of superstores has been increasing dramatically lately which reduces the small-scale businesses’ competitive strength. An opinion exists that the small stores’ exit from the local marketplace is sure to impact devastatingly in the area’S scale and cause the death of local community. Although I believe the industry giants’ speedy expansion on local market is damaging, some people consider it as an encouragement for small firms to discover unique ways of attracting clients.
On one hand, the individual enterprises should perceive the commercial networks’ increasing in the presence on local market as a chance for developing their inimitable strategy allowing them to attract customers. Such a unique feature let the small factories retain their segment of market and obtain the competitiveness of the released product. Big companies are predominantly focused on manufacturing the mass consumer goods rated at the average buyer which could be regarded as the weakness because no individuality IS involved. For example, according to the Russian businessman German Sterligov, the extremely high price and completely natural products composition permit his company to compete favorably with trade houses. Thus, small organizations with the deliberate strategy are sure to enjoy the success among purchasers even on condition of the selling corporations’ broad presence.
On the other hand, large industries possess ample resources for capturing the market at the local scale depriving small stores of the clients which is the very reason for bankruptcy and shutdown. Local shops propose the limited line of goods at heavy price while large retail chains are ready to offer products for every social stratum at the eligible cost. Moreover, big companies are used to enrolling adverts for promoting their networks occupying the market and replacing the traditional local shops with their supermarkets. For instance, as per the TASS, today the small townS’ residents are more prone to buy from large companies leading to the small businesses’ decline in the observed area.
Hence, competing with popular corporations seems almost impossible for individual shops as the formers do not obtain the requisite resources.
To sum up, though in theory local community businesses do possess the possibility to keep the customers, the big supermarkets still dispose more resources for attracting buyers. In general, large companies offer high quality goods at a reasonable price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, in general, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2131.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6525198939 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00118530855 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596816976127 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.2930423162 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.066666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196652494542 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662686694677 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551321205029 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115041298976 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676504622096 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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