These days, there is a vast increase in the setup of new and big supermarkets. Some people believe that such markets are providing great benefits in the development of the country, but I will argue that supermarkets are a big threat for the existence of small shops and markets.
Firstly, these markets have a big impact on the family of small business man. This is because such business families’ source of income solely depends on their business and they use it for their daily expenses, for child education. For instance, some vendors have stationary and confectionery shops, in the local communities, on which they are largely dependent to earn their income. If such shops get closed, it will hugely impact their daily life, child education and their health as well. Another point to consider is that there are some vendors who are not so educated and could not do other jobs if they lose their primary business. As an illustration, lot of such businesses passes from generation to generation, and most of the traders running shops do not have professional education. However, government should take initiative to provide them required education and training to acquire the demanded jobs in the market.
On the other hand, some people believe that such big markets have good advantages in comparison to single shops. They provide us a centered place for shopping, which is more comfortable and where we can buy any item from grocery to furniture. These shopping complexes give government huge fund and provide ample employment opportunities.
To conclude, although, these markets have advantages in terms of employment, new business opportunities, government funding but, in my opinion, local traders are under dangerous threat in running their businesses. Government should consider life of these local communities before opening huge markets.
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- Nowadays some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using the computer Do you agree or disagree 74
- Most societies have their homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree ? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 889, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'acquiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: acquiring
...de them required education and training to acquire the demanded jobs in the market. On ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84443440081 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552188552189 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6451166834 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.857142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163475755953 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577378537901 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466080589338 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994144026147 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370163515087 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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