Due to the development and rapid expansions of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my opinion, I disagree with the idea that closed the local business is synonymous with the dying of local communities.
First of all, the development of supermarkets offers a huge potential for local businesses especially small businesses. As a result, supermarkets can help businesses distribute their products nationwide or even larger, worldwide. For this, businesses can distribute their goods to consumers with reduced shipping costs, which is considered a conundrum for businesses, especially small businesses. Consequently, the expansion of supermarkets is not a knife to kill local businesses, it is also a growth potential for these small businesses. Personally speaking, the small business in local should seize this opportunity as a growth potential rather than a competition, which only brings disadvantages to both businesses and consumers.
Secondly, the development of supermarkets also means increased production for local businesses. It is clear that if a supermarket expands its market, the number of goods consumed will become larger and larger. This means that the supply, local businesses, will have to supply an increasingly large amount of goods. It is not only the development of local businesses but also the promotion of the brand of the business to more customers. As a matter of fact, when the business is known by more people, there will be more potential cooperation customers. This will help your business grow faster.
Finally, With the supermarket's product and food safety policy, businesses are required to perfect their products. For some small businesses, product quality assurance is almost without any safety standards, especially for traditional businesses. So the distribution in supermarkets is also an opportunity for these businesses to enhance their products in the current modernization era.
In conclusion, opportunities, the potential, a place to consume goods in large quantities and integrate into the world are the things that the strong development of supermarkets brings to small-scale businesses, especially local industry. Although it comes with many other shortcomings, the benefits it brings are likely to be more.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 19, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'supermarkets'' or 'supermarket's'?
Suggestion: supermarkets'; supermarket's
...usiness grow faster. Finally, With the supermarkets product and food safety policy, busines...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62613981763 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25755331879 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492401215805 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.785082022 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.882352941 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41176470588 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29233578894 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113499056498 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600118480091 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174723966747 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482549204101 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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