Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals assume that the closure of small businesses will lead to the extinction of local communities as supermarkets diversify in many countries and local businesses struggle to keep up. In my personal opinion, the decision to close the local business will have a significant impact on the surrounding community.
To begin with, many people in the surrounding neighborhood cannot afford to shop at large markets. This is due to an increase in the price of the products, particularly in comparison to goods sold locally. Shareholders of large stores who want to pay their rent from the income generated by high goods prices on a regular basisAs a result, many people avoid purchasing products at high prices in supermarkets. For instance, in Vietnam, more than half of the goods sold are priced higher than in small shops.
Furthermore, grocery stores are located in areas that are difficult to access. In other words, enormous markets are constructed in large cities far from towns and villages. This means that the population of nearby communities must travel a long distance to obtain basic necessities. As a consequence, people prefer to buy products from local shops because of their convenience and immediate availability. For illustration, in India, more than half of people buy products from small shops because they are cost-effective and provide quick points of interaction.
In conclusion, the closure of small businesses will lead to the eventual demise of local communities because residents will be unable to afford goods from large markets and shops will be built far from the access point. There will be no reason for large-scale markets if local shops sell high-quality products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...l businesses struggle to keep up. In my personal opinion, the decision to close the local busine...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...s must travel a long distance to obtain basic necessities. As a consequence, people prefer to buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26277372263 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96803077319 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540145985401 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5808015227 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263557910708 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910495110058 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119091012238 0.0667982634062 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182638199999 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145655475 0.056905535591 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.