Due to human activities on land and in the sea, the animals are becoming extinct. What are the reasons and Solutions?
Currently, many of animal species are becoming endangered in both terrestrial and coastal areas. This is mainly caused by the increasing number of people eating fish and the development of housing areas. Therefore, fish extensive farming and establishment of vertical house are the practically implemented solution to solve those issues.
Two ways of human activities disturbing animal habitats in the land on sea rea the demand of fish consumption and shelters. As fish is well known for its high protein contents, more people seem to be considered to consume fish regularly in the great amount. This gives rise to the number of people eating fish more healthily as well as living longer. The more people live longer, the more houses they need. For example, People in Taiwan who have the highest fish-consumed per capita in the world and doubled the population since 1990 experiencing fish-shortage and housing problems.
What can be done to tackle these issues? Two major effective solutions are to adopt fish extensive farming as well as build vertical houses. The reason for this is to sustain the group of fish in coastal areas getting a dramatic decline due to a significant demand of fish consumed. What is more, vertical housing is believed to decrease the use of lands caused/led/given rise to by overpopulation massively requiring more shelters. Having the same problems, the government of Indonesia in 2015 has successfully found solutions by developing fish extensive farming and vertical housing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccessfully found solutions by developing fish extensive farming and vertical hous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92258328665 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570247933884 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3310791092 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145601072599 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544003996568 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674939731963 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938925224941 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243470671953 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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