Due to human activities on land and in the sea, he animals are becoming extinct. What are the reasons and Solutions?
it is true that terrestrial and marine animal species are now endangered as a result of the actions of human. there are numerous reasons behind this phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to tackle the problem.
Deforestation to meet the growing demand for of accommodation and agriculture is one of the primary causes why many animals are on the brink of extinction. In fact, when animals’ habitats, on which they are dependent to survive, are destroyed, they would be have nowhere to provide themself with shelters, food sources as well as the breeding environment, which obviously results in the decline of their population. Another important factor is the pollution from irresponsible activities of humans. For example, a huge amount of toxic waste discharged directly into several Vietnamese rivers, such as thi Vai, Dong Nai, has devastated not only fish stocks but also others marine animals.
In order to deal with the this decline in the population of animal species, governments should play a vital role in enforcing strict legislation regarding the waste disposal, especially with from factories. With the sense of punishment, apparently, there would be more companies which are willing to install waste treatment system before discharging chemical waste into rivers and oceans. As a result, not only can this policy save the marine life but it also raises awareness about the social responsibility of enterprises. Furthermore, the conservation role of zoos must be prioritized. Take Africa as an example, a number of endangered species are now protected in designated wildlife reserves from poaching with special captivate breeding programs which helps maintain the ecological balance as well as encourage biodiversity.
In conclusion, various forms of environmental destruction have brought about the extinction of animal species, therefore the policies about controlling waste disposal and building nature reserves should be taken into consideration to solve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: There
...ed as a result of the actions of human. there are numerous reasons behind this phenom...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...ine animals. In order to deal with the this decline in the population of animal spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5993485342 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03760904697 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3382446312 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.25 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08569146603 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333169134066 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350553053604 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658083264318 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474444839396 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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