Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent technological developments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days, some people argue that previous technological developments were more advantageous and made more significant changes to human’s daily life than those in the present days. In my opinion, disagree with this viewpoint and will present my reasons in this essay.
To commence with, contemporary technology makes a dramatic difference to the way people communicate. In the past, people had no other methods of contact but sending letters, which often took long time for these letters to reach the receivers. Today, we have more than one means of communication such as mobile phones computers with Wi-Fi connection and various social media platforms. They all enable people to easily stay in touch with each other within seconds by texting, emailing or even making a video call regardless of the geographical distances.
In addition, recent technological advances also benefit people and create huge changes in terms of medical area. Few years ago, people might have limited cure for some lethal diseases and even little control over pandemic diseases because there was a shortage of technological supports. Nowadays, thanks to laboratories and research centers being fully equipped with advance technologies, scientists are able to quickly discover the origin of diseases and thus creating new medicines to alleviate them. For example, in the current outbreak of Covid-19 pandemic which has caused thousands of deaths all over the world, researchers have successfully created some types of vaccines such as mRNA and Pfizer to help protect the uninfected from the effects of coronavirus. This is such a medical breakthrough that changes human’s life during the pandemic due to the help of recent technology.
To conclude, personally believe that contemporary developments of technology bring more beneficial changes to people’s lives, typically in terms of communication and medicine.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54295532646 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92444910129 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639175257732 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4550192332 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.416666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244249586993 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894524328955 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912616207128 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165822500187 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687052242281 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.