Although it is thought by some that financial development is the strong indicator of nation's success, while other people believe that apart from economic growth, there are several other factors that could be used to access the status of the country. In my opinion, I consider that good education system is vital for any nation's success.
Besides economic progress, there are numerous other factors, those should definitely be considered as profound indicators of nation's prosperity. There measures include excellent education system, readily available medical facilities, human equality and rights. A good education system is essential for any country's progress. For example, a significant number of successful prestigious school, colleges, universities and other training organizations and availability of considerable number of scholarships, provision of wide variety of funding for various research projects in different fields, indicates towards the enormous success of a country. Furthermore, remarkable, instant, efficient and reliable medical service is another important measure to determine the standard of living in a country. For instance, well equipped hospitals and clinics, availability of advanced medical technology for diagnosis and treatment of various awful diseases, advanced medical research facilities for complex health issues such as, cancer and other nervous disorders etc, give indication towards nation's well being and success. Moreover, equal rights for both male and female is also extremely important to make country successful. To illustrate, equal opportunities in education, job market, career progression and other fields, for both genders, give clear picture of nation's status.
In my view, I think that good education system is imperative for a country to become successful. The main point to consider is that education system considerably affects rest other factors of success measurement. For an example, doctors and nurses need to be trained before providing any medical services so excellent medical training in established institutes eventually gives well renowned medical professional and specialist to the nation. Along with this, equal education right to both man and woman, strengthen country's roots and indicates towards the successful civilized nation. In addition to this, well educated people contribute significantly in country's GDP that results in huge economic development.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinion, I believe that good education system is a strong measure of nation's development. Therefore, government should thrive well to provide ample opportunities of education to every national that ultimately will represent the success of the country.
- In many government like to spend more money on the arts Some people agree with this However some think government should spend more on health and education Discuss both side and give your opinion 75
- Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read whereas others believe only printed material should be used Discuss both view and give your opinion 78
- Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree 78
- Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games However some people think that these activities are not good for a child s mental health To what extent do you agree or disagree 82
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 321, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... good education system is vital for any nations success. Besides economic progress, ...
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Line 3, column 866, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d hospitals and clinics, availability of advanced medical technology for diagnosi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2338.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90404040404 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97620481872 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.7230391749 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.529411765 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5294117647 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250436821225 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909748561126 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578916968835 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167480463256 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547126561455 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.24 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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