In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In education and employment,many people high work productivity than others.Why do a number of people assiduous?Is it constantly a good thing to toil hard?It is a fact that people love to work hard so they can become more successful,in addition to,jobs are also very important to people’s live.
Firstly,in education, teachers are often passionate about teaching their students whole heartedly so that the children can later become good people, and education is also one of the essential factors for a developed country develop strongly.In developed country,they often have students studying diligently for 12 hours,which shows that rich,developed country are always ahead of developing countries so in education some people work harder than others.Beside,in employment there is a significant number of people working in the US who often work overtime until 2-3 am to get home. They are able to do so because they have concerns about their family's finances, so they need very good health.I am of the conviction that in many country,some people keep one’s shoulder to the wheel than orthers.
However,why do they work so hard?First of all,they must work more lightly usual but they are motivated to try harder,because there is a significant number of people take care of food,clothing and money.If they don't have money, they will have to endure miserable situations where they can't eat enough to sleep, and for those who have children, they can't pay for their children's education.For example,in Vietnam many families are facing financial difficulties they may not spend freely so they have to try to work hard. Is it always a good thing to work hard?It is my contention that working hard is good but sometimes we also have to look at our strength.Many people try to work hard, but just because they work too hard, it has the opposite effect, which will make them more difficult than at first.
In conclusion,nowadays minimal amount of people more struggle on than others in education and employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18153846154 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06524553299 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532307692308 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.592066638 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.666666667 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.1666666667 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 7.06120827912 255% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408892410494 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228980852819 0.084324248473 272% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111638877796 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266577440369 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790096176681 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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