In education and employment, some people work harder than others.
Why do some people work harder?
Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In contemporary society, it is worth noticing that a number of employees contribute more effort in their workplace than others, especially in educational fields. Personally, i totally agree that working hard is beneficial for individuals and organisations. This paper will also be looking at the roots of this situation.
There are several reasons why people are hard working. The main reason is that these people often have a strong desire to get promoted in their workplace. Also, these people are considered ambitious and they go to work with one ultimate goal, that is to achive the highest position that thay wish for. As a result, they are willing to exert their time and effort at work in hope on receiving promotion in return. Another reason is that a group of people receiving pay rate based on hours. Therefore, the more they work, the higher income they receive. Hence, they strive to work as many hours as possible so that they can earn more money and accumulate their income.
Apart from the abovementioned reasons, being hard woking will do more good than harm. The first reason is that employees who work hard have a chance to learn and gain more experience. This is maily because these people have to be patient and able to work under pressure as well as to deal with a significant amount of workload. Then, once they complete their tasks, they might gradually turn into a better version of themselves. Futhermore, organsation will be benefited from diligent employees as if a staff member work hard, they can generate more productivity. Subsequently, the efficiency of the company will be boosted, leading to a possibility of achieving higher profits.
Taking everything into consideration, the fact that people hard working has been happening alertly due to the need of getting promoted and the desire for more income. I hold a firm belief that this trend has more positive effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99373040752 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7148710934 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567398119122 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7708326193 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236023375311 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813448332565 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541956694615 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144647458149 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364791769239 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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