Employer should give longer holiday to employees to encourage them to do their job well ?? Agree or dis

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...t employer plays pivotal role to enhance reputation of the company.so some think...
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...lays pivotal role to enhance reputation of the company.so some think that compa...
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...reputation of the company.so some think that company should not gives the holi...
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...y.so some think that company should not gives the holidays during work schudule...
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...so some think that company should not gives the holidays during work schudules. I ...
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...me think that company should not gives the holidays during work schudules. I wi...
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...ws before reaching at any conclusion. To embark upon, there are plethora of be...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ora of benefits for staying longer leave .workers can plan tour with their family ...
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...ances to solve personal problem and make strong relationship.As well as ,worker g...
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...l problem and make strong relationship.As well as ,worker get stress of doing lo...
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...and make strong relationship.As well as ,worker get stress of doing longer work ...
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...lationship.As well as ,worker get stress of doing longer work so they can feel f...
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...stress of doing longer work so they can feel fresh to go around any corner of th...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...esh to go around any corner of the world .Moreover, worker do not pay attention du...
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...h to go around any corner of the world .Moreover, worker do not pay attention during lon...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... do not pay attention during longer work .In this way ,they feel tired and suffere...
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...o not pay attention during longer work .In this way ,they feel tired and suffered ...
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...ttention during longer work .In this way ,they feel tired and suffered from mental...
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...ered from mentally ill problem.sometimes ,people get ill health and meet various t...
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...s types of fatal disease such as obesity ,typhoid and pneumonia. For example, due...
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Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ity ,typhoid and pneumonia. For example, due to staying longer work,there are nu...
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... pneumonia. For example, due to staying longer work,there are number of workers ...
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...or example, due to staying longer work,there are number of workers who suffered fro...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... longer work,there are number of workers who suffered from different types of dis...
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Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... different types of disease. However ,there are also drawbacks for taking lon...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ver ,there are also drawbacks for taking long leave .firstly, if employees take l...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...re also drawbacks for taking long leave .firstly, if employees take long leave so...
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Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...e long leave so company will be run down .company will also get finacial problem ....
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... .company will also get finacial problem .for instance, Iran businsess was famous ...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...amous in itally country.suddenly one day,employer gives longer holiday to them. Thats why...
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...,employer gives longer holiday to them. Thats why ,those business are pushed down .fu...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... gives longer holiday to them. Thats why ,those business are pushed down .furthurm...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...hats why ,those business are pushed down .furthurmore,employer cannot enhance the...
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...se business are pushed down .furthurmore,employer cannot enhance their dream to giving h...
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...ss are pushed down .furthurmore,employer cannot enhance their dream to giving hol...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...dream to giving holiday to worker.lastly ,the cusumer cannot like to buy product t...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
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...,the cusumer cannot like to buy product those company which have low quality of work and repu...
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Line 5, column 510, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ve low quality of work and reputation.so,boss cannot reached own distination of givin...
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...n of giving longer leave. To conclude,employer and employees are the part of the compa...
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...nd employees are the part of the company .industry cannot run without them. So ,...
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...d employees are the part of the company .industry cannot run without them. So ,b...
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...he company .industry cannot run without them. So ,boss should give neccessary le...
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... .industry cannot run without them. So ,boss should give neccessary leave to em...
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Line 7, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...So ,boss should give neccessary leave to employees in the limited way.
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...ve to employees in the limited way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97563127107 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.13793146 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.222222222 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249301642613 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959565061865 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609034726977 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153249898909 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465266739151 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.