There is no doubt that employer plays pivotal role to enhance reputation of the company.so some think that company should not gives the holidays during work schudules. I will partially in this statement. I will discuss my point of views before reaching at any conclusion.
To embark upon, there are plethora of benefits for staying longer leave .workers can plan tour with their family and friends which gives chances to solve personal problem and make strong relationship.As well as ,worker get stress of doing longer work so they can feel fresh to go around any corner of the world .Moreover, worker do not pay attention during longer work .In this way ,they feel tired and suffered from mentally ill problem.sometimes ,people get ill health and meet various types of fatal disease such as obesity ,typhoid and pneumonia. For example, due to staying longer work,there are number of workers who suffered from different types of disease.
However ,there are also drawbacks for taking long leave .firstly, if employees take long leave so company will be run down .company will also get finacial problem .for instance, Iran businsess was famous in itally country.suddenly one day,employer gives longer holiday to them. That's why ,those business are pushed down .furthurmore,employer cannot enhance their dream to giving holiday to worker.lastly ,the cusumer cannot like to buy product those company which have low quality of work and reputation.so,boss cannot reached own distination of giving longer leave.
To conclude,employer and employees are the part of the company .industry cannot run without them. So ,boss should give neccessary leave to employees in the limited way.
There is no doubt that employer plays pivotal role to enhance reputation of the company.so some think that company should not gives the holidays during work schudules. I will partially in this statement. I will discuss my point of views before reaching at any conclusion.
To embark upon, there are plethora of benefits for staying longer leave .workers can plan tour with their family and friends which gives chances to solve personal problem and make strong relationship.As well as ,worker get stress of doing longer work so they can feel fresh to go around any corner of the world .Moreover, worker do not pay attention during longer work .In this way ,they feel tired and suffered from mentally ill problem.sometimes ,people get ill health and meet various types of fatal disease such as obesity ,typhoid and pneumonia. For example, due to staying longer work,there are number of workers who suffered from different types of disease.
However ,there are also drawbacks for taking long leave .firstly, if employees take long leave so company will be run down .company will also get finacial problem .for instance, Iran businsess was famous in itally country.suddenly one day,employer gives longer holiday to them. That's why ,those business are pushed down .furthurmore,employer cannot enhance their dream to giving holiday to worker.lastly ,the cusumer cannot like to buy product those company which have low quality of work and reputation.so,boss cannot reached own distination of giving longer leave.
To conclude,employer and employees are the part of the company .industry cannot run without them. So ,boss should give neccessary leave to employees in the limited way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97563127107 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647940074906 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.13793146 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.222222222 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37480212723 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192450141108 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187661324638 0.0667982634062 281% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300624728888 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.328799239587 0.056905535591 578% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.23 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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